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(Tattoo Assignment)
I make a lot of connections when I write an assignment. Like my tattoo assignment where I conected with my family and what I like.
A4 select, adapt, and apply a range of strategies to interact and collaborate with others in pairs and groups, including
I work with my group really well working with Arman and sharing ideas with him and my other group members.
I think I am good with going through my work and other people's work and comparing then and using techniques to improve my work. I also think I need to work on my technique in writing. I am not the best formal writer as you can tell by my essay writing and it is definitely something I need to work on.
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(Who killed Wellington Essay)
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Quality of Communication Skills-- speak and listen to make personal responses to texts, by
– making connections with prior knowledge and experiences – relating reactions and emotions to understanding of the text – generating thoughtful questions
– making inferences
– explaining opinions using reasons and evidence
A4 select, adapt, and apply a range of strategies to interact and collaborate with others in pairs and groups, including
- – initiating and sharing responsibilities
– listening actively
– contributing ideas and supporting the ideas of others – acknowledging and discussing diverse points of view – reaching consensus or agreeing to differ
- – making and supporting reasoned judgments
– examining and comparing ideas and elements among texts
– describing and comparing perspectives
– describing bias, contradictions, and non-represented perspectives
– identifying the importance and impact of historical and cultural contexts
I think I deserve a 22% in this category.
Contribution to the Learning Environment- I sometimes go back and edit my work after a classmate has commented on mine but sometimes I don't because I was just to lazy to edit it. I also provide useful comments but mostly I just say good job and the part that I liked the best. I think i'm really good with talking to my group with ideas and they are really good with giving out idea's too. I also think I am good with commenting interesting facts on research assignments on poem writers. I also help my group members with technology issues like for Jeremy, he needs someone to log into the laptops, so I log into my account for him. I am good with finishing my work on time so other people can read it and also think I bring a positive mindset and hard work to the class. I am really good at listening to my groups idea's and adding them to improve my work. I think I deserve a 29% in this category.



Ryan I appreciated your maturity and sense of humour in our class. I think your final is a solid reflection of what you did this year. Like some of your essays your middle section was missing the attention to details (snap shots of evidence for each PLO) but you complete your work with an honest and positive tone. The expectations of your writing will continue to increase in Grade 11/12 so I think your focus needs to be one the focus, energy, and attention to details in your essays. :) Good luck!
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